Here are my changes to your changes:
C | | Db | |
Bbm7 | Eb7 | Ab | |
Gm7 | C7 | F | |
Fm7 | Bb7 | Ebm7 Ab7 | Dm7 G7 |
C | | Db | |
Bbm7 | Eb7 | Gb7 | F7 |
Bb7 |Dm7 G7| C F7 | Em7 Am7 |
Dm7 | G7 | C |(Dm7 G7) |
I'm sure yours work fine, but these are the ones I learned from Joe
Pass's version many moons ago and I'm used to hearing the tune this way.
Clay