I made one error in my post and it should be corrected.
I said:
>I also noticed that you had an f against an a7 chord, which should sound
>ok according to my last post.
There is no a7 chord in the tune. (as far as I could see at this time) Sorry.
This line should be changed to:
I also noticed that you had an d against an f#7 chord, which should sound
ok according to my last post.
In the same phrase (meas 18), you have a f against an f#7 chord (looks like
a passing tone to me).
I understand your replies and they seem reasonable to me.
FO-DO-DE-O-DO, BOOP-BOOP-A-DOOP,
HAVA NICE DAY
jules